Para.2. Three lines from the end. For "all concern-
ed", substitute "the Unofficial Members of Legislative
Council."
Reason. It is important that the unofficial
members of Leg. Co. should be looked to rather than
half baked bodies of small membership representing no-
one but themselves.
Para.4. Last word in second sentence. For "criticism"
løbjxti
substitute akti "objection."
Para. 4. Third sentence. Between the word "you" & the
word "would" insert the words "& the Unofficial Mem-
bers"
Same sentence, three lines lower down. For "European"
substitute "non-Chinese"
Para. 4. Fourth sentence.
Delete last eleven words
beginning with "but" & substitute "but it should not
be appointment by the Governor after nomination by ✰
the body concerned, but actual election by the body.
Election should also be by secret ballot."
Para. 4. Fifth sentence. For "Chinese" substitute
"non-British". Add a ̈-"after "non British". Insert
after "interests"
-
in Hong Kong".
Para. 5. Add a new sentence at the end. "The Urban
Council might also be one of the bodies which would
elect ¤KE one or more of their members to the Leg-
islative Council.
Para. 6. First sentence.Delete "with the full ap- proval of the Unofficial Members."
Reason. Although it is unlikely, I might not agree with the proposals of the Unofficials.