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proposal. occasions, also
As we had made clear on a number of previous the single-seat, single-vote method should
Page 29 para. 44: we probably should say something after or at the end of this paragraph to confirm that the Governor made his statement to LegCo; otherwise there is a/gap between the exchange with the Chinese referred to In para. 44 and the later reference (in para. 86) about the introduction of legislation. Perhaps an
an additional sentence да follows: "On December 2, the Governor informed the Legislative Council that draft legislation
the first-stage issues would be gazetted December and introduced into the Council on 15 December."
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Page 34, para, 56, second sentence: the word "reporting" in the third line of bridge the should more accurately be "recommending", according to CAB.
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Page sections of the Election committee only includes the FX8. We suggest redrafting this sentence to read: "The first three sectors would be elected by grouping 27 the 30 Functional Constituences into three groups of
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Kuk functional constituences would be represented in the fourth sector of the Committee see below.) Electors in each of the 27 Functional Constituencies would then elect
the
Page 42, para. 86: the tenses in this paragraph may need
if the changing
White Paper is
after published legislation has been introduced.
Page 47 (second page of Annex 1):
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Municipal Councils and District Boards 4th column
We wonder if "Hints of agreement to disagree as part of a first-stage package" is quite right now. It would be better to say something along the lines of "TE British side abolished appointed members in
1994/95, Chinese Government would reinstate appointed membership in 1997, with SAR determining no. appointed members."
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The sentence should more accurately read: "Election to the first three sectors of EC by block vote.
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