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TO IMMEDIATE HONG KONG

TELNO 312

OF 03140OZ FEBRUARY 87

INFO IMMEDIATE PEKING

FROM HKD

ANNUAL REPORT TO PARLIAMENT

ken

1.

WE HAVE RECEIVED PROOFS OF THE REPORT FROM THE PRINTERS

THE FOLLOWING AMENDMENTS HAVE BEEN MADE TO THE DRAFT WE SENT YOU

AND PEKING ON 13 JANUARY, RESULTING FROM A FINAL CHECK OF THE

DRAFT BEFORE IT WENT TO THE PRINTERS (BY NTD) AND CAREFUL READING

OF THE PROOFS BY OURSELVES AND NTD.

PARA 2 SECOND SENTENCE: INSERT QUOTE THE QUESTION OF

UNQUOTE BETWEEN QUOTE JOINT DECLARATION ON UNQUOTE AND QUOTE HONG

KONG UNQUOTE.

PARAS 3, 6, 7, 8 AND 10: THE REFERENCES TO QUOTE THE

QUEEN UNQUOTE SHOULD ALL HAVE A CAPITAL T.

PARAS 7 AND 9: REFERENCES TO THE ROYAL VISIT SHOULD HAVE

CAPITAL R AND CAPITAL V.

PARA 11 (III), FINAL SENTENCE: QUOTE HERE UNQUOTE SHOULD

BE QUOTE THERE UNQUOTE.

PARA 15, FIRST SENTENCE: THE COLONS AFTER QUOTE VISITS TO

THE UK UNQUOTE AND QUOTE GRANTED BRITISH CITIZENSHIP UNQUOTE

SHOULD BE SEMICOLONS.

PARA 17, FINAL SENTENCE: QUOTE PASSPORT UNQUOTE SHOULD

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