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FM FCO
TO IMMEDIATE HONG KONG
TELNO 312
OF 03140OZ FEBRUARY 87
INFO IMMEDIATE PEKING
FROM HKD
ANNUAL REPORT TO PARLIAMENT
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1.
WE HAVE RECEIVED PROOFS OF THE REPORT FROM THE PRINTERS
THE FOLLOWING AMENDMENTS HAVE BEEN MADE TO THE DRAFT WE SENT YOU
AND PEKING ON 13 JANUARY, RESULTING FROM A FINAL CHECK OF THE
DRAFT BEFORE IT WENT TO THE PRINTERS (BY NTD) AND CAREFUL READING
OF THE PROOFS BY OURSELVES AND NTD.
PARA 2 SECOND SENTENCE: INSERT QUOTE THE QUESTION OF
UNQUOTE BETWEEN QUOTE JOINT DECLARATION ON UNQUOTE AND QUOTE HONG
KONG UNQUOTE.
PARAS 3, 6, 7, 8 AND 10: THE REFERENCES TO QUOTE THE
QUEEN UNQUOTE SHOULD ALL HAVE A CAPITAL T.
PARAS 7 AND 9: REFERENCES TO THE ROYAL VISIT SHOULD HAVE
CAPITAL R AND CAPITAL V.
PARA 11 (III), FINAL SENTENCE: QUOTE HERE UNQUOTE SHOULD
BE QUOTE THERE UNQUOTE.
PARA 15, FIRST SENTENCE: THE COLONS AFTER QUOTE VISITS TO
THE UK UNQUOTE AND QUOTE GRANTED BRITISH CITIZENSHIP UNQUOTE
SHOULD BE SEMICOLONS.
PARA 17, FINAL SENTENCE: QUOTE PASSPORT UNQUOTE SHOULD
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