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THINK THE SENTENCE STRUCUTRE SHOULD ALSO BE DIFFERENT:
SOMETHING LIKE 'JIANG LAI KEN DING YOU BU SHAO...?
VI) PARA 11, LAST SENTENCE: UNLESS 'FU ZHI' IS THE
ACCEPTED LOCAL TRANSLATION OF 'WELLBEING', I SUGGEST 'XING
FU'. SHOULD THERE NOT ALSO BE A CONJUNCTION BEFORE THE
COMPOUND? IF 'HE' IS USED, THE EARLIER 'HE' COULD BE
CHANGED TO 'TONG'.
WHAT
I PUT FORWARD THESE VIEWS WITH SOME DIFFIDENCE.
MATTERS IS THAT THE TRANSLATION SHOULD SOUND RIGHT IN HONG KONG.
MY COMMENTS SHOULD NOT THEREFORE BE TREATED AS HOLY WRIT.
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GRATEFUL TO SEE FAXED REDRAFT BY 030930Z AT THE LATEST.
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