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Mr Gray

CONFIDENTIAL

Nationality & Treaty Department

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Mo Willemen

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PA

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NATIONALITY BILL

1.

I am sorry to have delayed my department's comments on

the drafts circulated under cover of your minute of 10 July.

2.

I attach the following suggested redrafts:-

a)

a new opening for the submission;

b) a redraft of the present paragraphs 4-7 (I suggest you use sub-headings to make the submission easier to follow);

c) a redraft of paragraph 4 of the draft letter excluding

the last sentence.

3. I am returning your draft.

12 July 1979

R JT McLaren

Hong Kong and General Department

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Mr White, SAD Mr Ure, SAMD

Mr Daunt, SED

Mr Newington, RID Mr Shepherd, MVD

CONFIDENTIAL

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