Mr Gray
CONFIDENTIAL
Nationality & Treaty Department
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Mo Willemen
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NATIONALITY BILL
1.
I am sorry to have delayed my department's comments on
the drafts circulated under cover of your minute of 10 July.
2.
I attach the following suggested redrafts:-
a)
a new opening for the submission;
b) a redraft of the present paragraphs 4-7 (I suggest you use sub-headings to make the submission easier to follow);
c) a redraft of paragraph 4 of the draft letter excluding
the last sentence.
3. I am returning your draft.
12 July 1979
R JT McLaren
Hong Kong and General Department
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Mr White, SAD Mr Ure, SAMD
Mr Daunt, SED
Mr Newington, RID Mr Shepherd, MVD
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