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8. I hope that on receipt of your reply I shall be in position to send open reply to your despatch No.145 which can be published with that despatch. Following points have been raised here from publication `aspect:-
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Under mentioned passages in your despatch might give rise to unnecessary controversy and misunderstanding and it might therefore be desirable to delete them before publication.
(a) From "although" in line 2 of paragraph 2 to "it"
in line 4 of that paragraph.
(b) Last two sentences of paragraph 9.
(c) In paragraph 15 from "Suggestion" to "in the
second" and "adhere to my original proposals and".
II. Reference in paragraph 8 to discussions with Chinese representative bodies and/or mention of their names might embarrass those bodies or affect their ability or willingness to co-operate in the future. this is likely reference might be amended and names deleted.
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III. Proposals in your despatch might be amended in light of my decision on point (b)-in paragraph 3 above, so that it will not be necessary to refer to this some- what delicate point in my reply. Despatch might also be amended if necessary in light of your decision on suggestion in last sentence of that paragraph.
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