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Page 3, para. 14 under "Melaya" the wording "Raffles College should be reorganised etc" seems to me misleading. ine training of teach-
lor secondary schools was an active unct- ion of affies College, which nad & iaculty ol Education. I suggest the substitution of tnis "ording:- "he training of teachers at nailies College snould be reorganised so as to intro- duce fecilities for teaching in 10 lay, Dandarin and Tomil ith the object of (a) providing etc"
in sub-ɔeragraph (b) 1 "ould correct the spelling of "principal"!
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Page 4 para. 15 I think the first sentence might be omitted as irrelevant and idle.
(y) I doubt whether the word "primerily" relects
the aiscussion in Committes.
The words "in the
first place" ṛould be more rudent.
P: rs. 10 -[So many "earlies" mene me yawn." anɑ]
I don't thin the reason given in
in the sentence
"in the interests
territories" is O Lie
point. i would ugest leaving it cut and adding after "... hostilities Degan" "and so resume the educational development which was penetr ting more deeply into the general economy of the country"
Pare. 17. i don't like "the further growth of vested interests" end suggest instead "...to avoid any vesting of interests and any interim action which would prejudice development along the lines of the Report."
(r)
Saculd not the word"location" be inserted after "Kuala Lumpur"?
L. purs