such phrases as "the Hong Kong
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Government undertakes" which
appeared elsewhere in the draft
are inappropriate and suitable
amondments have been made where
such phrases occurred, that is
in Articles, 11, 12 and 23,*
(2) The correct formal
descriptions of His Majesty's
Government and the Chinese
Government have been inserted
in the preamble and in Article 24.
(3) Article 24 has been largely
re-drafted to give its intention
more precise effect.
(4) The usual wording as to
the English text prevailing has
been substituted in Article 25.
(5) A few minor amendments
of drafting and punctuation have
been made, the intention of which
will be obvious.
4.