CO129-487 - Others & Individuals - 1924 — Page 294

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OPERATIONS DIVISION

14th July 1924

Dear Mr. Paskin,

Thank you for the draft notes. I am returning them herewith, and have suggested an alteration in pencil on page A and a small addition on page 5. Otherwise, I do not want to make any comments.

Yours sincerely,

E. Tomkin

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OPERATIONS DIVISION14th July 1924Dear Mr. Paskin,Thank you for the draft notes. I am returning them herewith, and have suggested an alteration in pencil on page A and a small addition on page 5. Otherwise, I do not want to make any comments.Yours sincerely,E. Tomkin284

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OPERATIONS DIVISION.14th July 1924,Dear lir. Paskin,Thank you for the draft notes. I am returning them herewith, and have suggested an alteration in pencil on page A and a small addition on page 5. Otherwise, I do not want to make any comments.Yours sincerely,4. Tomkin284

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OPERATIONS DIVISION.

14th July 1924,

Dear lir. Paskin,

Thank you for the draft notes.

I am returning them herewith, and

have suggested an alteration in pencil on page A

and a small addition on page 5. Otherwise, I

do not want to make any comments.

Yours sincerely,

4. Tomkin

284

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