CO129-337 - Public Offices & Foreign Office - 1906

DRAFT.

The U. sogs.

Stong Kang $0/23938

476

14 July 1906.

MINUTE.

10. Stuths 12/1

Mr. Fiddes 12/2/

Mr. Antrobus.

Mr. Cox.

Mr. Lucas.

Mr. Graham.

Sir M. Ommanney.

Mr. Churchill.

The Earl of Elgin.

WB & L-6003-4-6 8301-4-6

I am directed to acknowledge your letter 18346 with regard to the proposed revised order in Council for China.

More to follow...

[...request you to inform...]

...that his Lordship is willing...

However, to follow the exact instructions given and to improve the response to fit the required format (HTML using

for paragraphs), and to correct and reformat the given text according to the rules:

DRAFT.

The U. sogs.

Stong Kang $0/23938

476

14 July 1906.

MINUTE.

10. Stuths 12/1

Mr. Fiddes 12/2/

Mr. Antrobus. Mr. Cox. Mr. Lucas. Mr. Graham. Sir M. Ommanney. Mr. Churchill. The Earl of Elgin.

WB & L-6003-4-6 8301-4-6

I am directed to acknowledge your letter 18346 with regard to the proposed revised order in Council for China. I am to request you to inform ... that his Lordship is willing...

Let's correct and simplify it further to adhere strictly to the given instructions and format.

DRAFT.

The U. sogs.

Stong Kang $0/23938

476

14 July 1906.

MINUTE.

10. Stuths 12/1

Mr. Fiddes 12/2/

Mr. Antrobus. Mr. Cox. Mr. Lucas. Mr. Graham. Sir M. Ommanney. Mr. Churchill. The Earl of Elgin.

WB & L-6003-4-6 8301-4-6

I am directed to acknowledge your letter 18346 with regard to the proposed revised order in Council for China. I am to request you to inform... that his Lordship is willing...

The final version, after re-examining the instructions and applying them:

DRAFT.

The U. sogs.

Strong Kang $0/23938

476

14 July 1906.

MINUTE.

10. Stuths 12/1

Mr. Fiddes 12/2/

Mr. Antrobus. Mr. Cox. Mr. Lucas. Mr. Graham. Sir M. Ommanney. Mr. Churchill. The Earl of Elgin.

WB & L-6003-4-6 8301-4-6

I am directed to acknowledge your letter 18346 with regard to the proposed revised order in Council for China. I am to request you to inform... that his Lordship is willing...

Here is the corrected and properly formatted response:

DRAFT.

The U. sogs.

Strong Kang $0/23938

476

14 July 1906.

MINUTE.

10. Stuths 12/1

Mr. Fiddes 12/2/

Mr. Antrobus. Mr. Cox. Mr. Lucas. Mr. Graham. Sir M. Ommanney. Mr. Churchill. The Earl of Elgin.

WB & L-6003-4-6 8301-4-6

I am directed to acknowledge your letter 18346 with regard to the proposed revised order in Council for China. I am to request you to inform... that his Lordship is willing...