CO129-324 - Governor Nathan - 1904 [10-12]

Mr.

Mr.

DRAFT.

Hong Kong 139672

for

Hoy King 3460

yo

Sir M. Nathan

MINUTE.

Staff 30/11 Collins, yo

Mr. Antrobus,

Mr. Cox.

Mr. Lucas.

Mr. Graham.

Sir M. Ommanney.

The Duke of Marlborough,

Mr. Lyttelton.

aff & C.17. a home. 2/18104 drafts.

Sir,

2 Dec:1904.

I have the honour to ack: the receipt of your despatch of No 378 of the 22nd ult: on the subject of the Govt. Nursing Probationers.

2. I do not ... your proposals for the training of

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Mr.

Mr.

DRAFT.

Hong Kong 139672

for

Hoy King 3460

yo

Sir M. Nathan

MINUTE.

Staff 30/11 Collins, yo

Mr. Antrobus,

Mr. Cox.

Mr. Lucas.

Mr. Graham.

Sir M. Ommanney.

The Duke of Marlborough,

Mr. Lyttelton.

aff & C.17. a home. 2/18104 drafts.

Sir,

194

2 Dec:1904.

I have the honour to ack: the receipt of your despatch of No 378 the 22nd ult: on the subject of the Govt. Nursing Probationers.

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Mr.

Mr.

DRAFT.

Hong Kong 139672

for

Hoy King 3460

yo

Sir M. Nathan

MINUTE.

Staff 30/11 Collins, yo

Mr. Antrobus,

Mr. Cox.

Mr. Lucas.

Mr. Graham.

Sir M. Ommanney.

The Duke of Marlborough,

Mr. Lyttelton.

aff & C.17. a home. 2/18104 drafts.

Sir,

194

2 Dec:1904.

I have the honour to ack: the receipt of your despatch of No 378 the 22nd ult: on the subject of the Govt. Nursing Probationers.

2. I do not ... your proposals for the training of Nursing Probatimers.

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Mr.

Mr.

DRAFT.

Hong Kong 139672

for

Hoy King 3460

yo

Sir M. Nathan

MINUTE.

Staff 30/11 Collins, yo

Mr. Antrobus,

Mr. Cox.

Mr. Lucas.

Mr. Graham.

Sir M. Ommanney.

The Duke of Marlborough,

Mr. Lyttelton.

aff & C.17. a home. 2/18104 drafts.

Sir,

194

2 Dec:1904.

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Mr.

Mr.

DRAFT.

Hong Kong 139672

for

Hoy King 3460

yo

Sir M. Nathan

MINUTE.

Staff 30/11 Collins, yo

Mr. Antrobus,

Mr. Cox.

Mr. Lucas.

Mr. Graham.

Sir M. Ommanney.

The Duke of Marlborough,

Mr. Lyttelton.

aff & C.17. a home. 2/18104 drafts.

Sir,

194

2 Dec:1904.

I have the honour to ack: the receipt of your despatch of No 378 the 22nd ult: on the subject of the Govt. Nursing Probationers.

2. I do not ... your proposals for the training of Nursing Probatimers.

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Mr.

Mr.

DRAFT.

Hong Kong 139672

for

Hoy King 3460

yo

Sir M. Nathan

MINUTE.

Staff 30/11 Collins, yo

Mr. Antrobus,

Mr. Cox.

Mr. Lucas.

Mr. Graham.

Sir M. Ommanney.

The Duke of Marlborough,

Mr. Lyttelton.

aff & C.17. a home. 2/18104 drafts.

Sir,

194

2 Dec:1904.

I have the honour to ack: the receipt of your despatch of No 378 the 22nd ult: on the subject of the Govt. Nursing Probationers.

2. I do not ... your proposals for the training of Nursing Probatimers.