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Tapee with how Johnson an to suffected refly of too but we should point out in writing to Ho that the alter is not one for pelitong right has there is nothing libe for litigated between the petri this case bubs & the Crown in of compe petition to It me could be presented arking for schief under the cicns LI wh: the petor are placed
Atome Hoe 3073
Any further communication on the short of this latior should be addressed UNDER SECBRTARY OF STATE, HOME OFFICE, LONDON, B.W., de following number quntoù 1--- B37,068/5.
Sir,
WHITEHALL. C 0. 25th March 1903. 11463 [Rest 27 MAR 03]
With reference to your letter of the 6th November Lo 1901 (38253/1901) on the subject of a Petition of Right on behalf of Messrs Stephens and Howard of Hong Kong, I am directed by Mr. Secretary Akers-Doouglas to transmit to you, herewith, copy of a letter which has been received from Messrs Trass and Taylor respecting the petition in question, together with copy of the Report of the Attorney-General (dated 29th November 1901) upon the Petition; and I am to request that in laying the same before the Secretary of State for the Colonies, you will move him to favour Mr. Akers-Douglas with any observations he may have to offer, or take any action he may think fit to take, in the matter.
I am, Sir, Your obedient Servant,
The Under Secretary of State, Colonial Office.
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To be frank, Johnson's reply is too affected, but we should point out in writing to Ho that the altercation is not one for pleading right as there is nothing likely to be litigated between the petitioner in this case, Bubbs & the Crown, in competition to it, which could be presented asking for relief under the circumstances. LI wh: the petitioner are placed
Atome Hoe 3073
Any further communication on the subject of this letter should be addressed to UNDER SECRETARY OF STATE, HOME OFFICE, LONDON, S.W., under the following number: B37,068/5.
Sir,
WHITEHALL. C.O. 25th March 1903. 11463 [Received 27 MAR 03]
With reference to your letter of the 6th November last 1901 (38253/1901) on the subject of a Petition of Right on behalf of Messrs Stephens and Howard of Hong Kong, I am directed by Mr. Secretary Akers-Douglas to transmit to you, herewith, copy of a letter which has been received from Messrs Trass and Taylor respecting the petition in question, together with copy of the Report of the Attorney-General (dated 29th November 1901) upon the Petition; and I am to request that in laying the same before the Secretary of State for the Colonies, you will move him to favour Mr. Akers-Douglas with any observations he may have to offer, or take any action he may think fit to take, in the matter.
I am, Sir, Your obedient Servant,
The Under Secretary of State, Colonial Office.
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Tapee with how Johnson an to suffected refly of too but we should point out in writing to Ho that the alter is not one for pelitong right has there is nothing libe for litigated between the petri this case bubs & the Crown in of compe petition to It me could be presented arking for schief under the cicns LI wh: the petor are placed
Atome Hoe 3073
Any further communication on the short of this latior should be addressed UNDER SECRETARY OF STATE, HOME OFFICE, LONDON, B.W., de following number quntoù 1--- B37,068/5.
Sir,
WHITEHALL. C.O. 25th March 1903. 11463 [Received 27 MAR 03]
With reference to your letter of the 6th November Lo 1901 (38253/1901) on the subject of a Petition of Right on behalf of Messrs Stephens and Howard of Hong Kong, I am directed by Mr. Secretary Akers-Doouglas to transmit to you, herewith, copy of a letter which has been received from Messrs Trass and Taylor respecting the petition in question, together with copy of the Report of the Attorney-General (dated 29th November 1901) upon the Petition; and I am to request that in laying the same before the Secretary of State for the Colonies, you will move him to favour Mr. Akers-Douglas with any observations he may have to offer, or take any action he may think fit to take, in the matter.
I am, Sir, Your obedient Servant,
The Under Secretary of State, Colonial Office.
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To be frank, Johnson's reply is too affected, but we should point out in writing to Ho that the altercation is not one for pleading right as there is nothing likely to be litigated between the petitioner in this case, Bubbs & the Crown, in competition to it, which could be presented asking for relief under the circumstances. LI wh: the petitioner are placed
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Tapee with how Johnson an to suffected refly of too but we should point out in writing to Ho that the alter is not one for pelitong right has there is nothing libe for litigated between the petri this case bubs & the Crown in of compe petition to It me could be presented arking for schief under the cicns LI wh: the petor are placed
Atome Hoe 3073
Any further communication on the short of this latior should be addressed UNDER SECRETARY OF STATE, HOME OFFICE, LONDON, B.W., de following number quntoù 1--- B37,068/5.
Sir,
WHITEHALL. C.O. 25th March 1903. 11463 [Rest 27 MAR 03]
With reference to your letter of the 6th November Lo 1901 (38253/1901) on the subject of a Petition of Right on behalf of Messrs Stephens and Howard of Hong Kong, I am directed by Mr. Secretary Akers-Douglas to transmit to you, herewith, copy of a letter which has been received from Messrs Trass and Taylor respecting the petition in question, together with copy of the Report of the Attorney-General (dated 29th November 1901) upon the Petition; and I am to request that in laying the same before the Secretary of State for the Colonies, you will move him to favour Mr. Akers-Douglas with any observations he may have to offer, or take any action he may think fit to take, in the matter.
I am, Sir, Your obedient Servant,
The Under Secretary of State, Colonial Office.
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Tapee with how Johnson an to suffected refly of too but we should point out in writing to Ho that the alter is not one for pelitong right has there is nothing libe for litigated between the petri this case bubs & the Crown in of compe petition to It me could be presented arking for schief under the cicns LI wh: the petor are placed
Atome Hoe 3073
Any further communication on the short of this latior should be addressed UNDER SECRETARY OF STATE, HOME OFFICE, LONDON, B.W., de following number quntoù 1--- B37,068/5.
Sir,
WHITEHALL. C.O. 25th March 1903. 11463 [Received 27 MAR 03]
With reference to your letter of the 6th November Lo 1901 (38253/1901) on the subject of a Petition of Right on behalf of Messrs Stephens and Howard of Hong Kong, I am directed by Mr. Secretary Akers-Douglas to transmit to you, herewith, copy of a letter which has been received from Messrs Trass and Taylor respecting the petition in question, together with copy of the Report of the Attorney-General (dated 29th November 1901) upon the Petition; and I am to request that in laying the same before the Secretary of State for the Colonies, you will move him to favour Mr. Akers-Douglas with any observations he may have to offer, or take any action he may think fit to take, in the matter.
I am, Sir, Your obedient Servant,
The Under Secretary of State, Colonial Office.