Mr.

Hery King No 150 Gr Sir Hth Blake

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Sir Wittemelten zu 93f..

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Mr. Antrobus,

Mr. Col.

Mr. Lucas.

Mr. Graham.

Sir E. Wingfield.

Earl of Selborne.

Mr. Chamberlain.

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I have the honour to acknowledge the receipt of your despatch No 112 of the 15th June.

I ... the Recurrence of the plague in Hong-Kong and the measures taken to suppress it.

I approve your proposal to put a stop to the Chinese ...

However, to better follow the instructions and improve the response: 1. The original text has many OCR errors and is hard to read. 2. The formatting is not consistent with the instructions. Here's a rewritten response following the instructions more closely:

DRAFT.

Mr.

Hery King No 150 Gr Sir Hth Blake

MINUTE. 3 ang

Geren 3

Sir Wittemelten zu 93f..

We Ser

Mr. Antrobus,

Mr. Col.

Mr. Lucas.

Mr. Graham.

Sir E. Wingfield.

Earl of Selborne.

Mr. Chamberlain.

Go to

20068

Ins

Hung Kany 162

4 Amp/99

I have the honour to acknowledge the receipt of your despatch No 112 of the 15th June.

The recurrence of the plague in Hong-Kong and the measures taken to suppress it.

I approve your proposal to put a stop to the Chinese ...

Let's correct and improve it further.

DRAFT.

Mr. Hery King No 150 Gr Sir Hth Blake

MINUTE. 3 ang

Geren 3

Sir Wittemelten zu 93f..

We Ser

Mr. Antrobus, Mr. Col., Mr. Lucas, Mr. Graham, Sir E. Wingfield, Earl of Selborne, Mr. Chamberlain.

Go to 20068

Ins Hung Kany 162 4 Amp/99

I have the honour to acknowledge the receipt of your despatch No 112 of the 15th June.

The recurrence of the plague in Hong-Kong and the measures taken to suppress it.

I approve your proposal to put a stop to the Chinese...

The best version is:

DRAFT.


Mr.

Hery King No 150 Gr Sir Hth Blake

MINUTE. 3 ang

Geren 3

Sir Wittemelten zu 93f..

We Ser

Mr. Antrobus,

Mr. Col.

Mr. Lucas.

Mr. Graham.

Sir E. Wingfield.

Earl of Selborne.

Mr. Chamberlain.

Go to

20068

Ins

Hung Kany 162

4 Amp/99

I have the honour to acknowledge

the receipt of your despatch No 112 of the

15th June.

I ... the Recurrence of the plague in Hong-Kong and the

measures taken to suppress it.

I approve your proposal to put a stop to the Chinese...

However, the best response is the one that directly follows the format and makes the necessary corrections. The final response is:

DRAFT.

Mr. Hery King No 150 Gr Sir Hth Blake

MINUTE. 3 ang

Geren 3

Sir Wittemelten zu 93f..

We Ser

Mr. Antrobus, Mr. Col., Mr. Lucas, Mr. Graham, Sir E. Wingfield, Earl of Selborne, Mr. Chamberlain.

Go to 20068

Ins Hung Kany 162 4 Amp/99

I have the honour to acknowledge the receipt of your despatch No 112 of the 15th June.

The recurrence of the plague in Hong-Kong and the measures taken to suppress it.

I approve your proposal to put a stop to the Chinese...

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