Cofey

Sir,

C C. 1898

513

Government Normal School

9 NOV 83

September 18

As desired by you

I

have the honour to forward...

remarks cover:

· your my the discontinuance

of

the

Normal School.

F

I advocate the closing

of

the Normal School

on the grounds that:-

1. As the school was started so hurriedly, and at a time when Chinese are not likely to make any change (viz: towards the close of the year).

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Cofey

Sir,

C C. 1898

513

Government Normal School

9 NOV 83

September 18

As desired by you

I

have the honour to forward...

remarks cover:

· you my the discontinuance

of

the

Normal School.

F

I advocate the closing

of

the Normal School

on the grounds that:-

1. As the school was started so hurriedly, and at ... when Chinese do not ... to make ... B. Wright. Erg of sinorlo any change (viz: towards the close of the year).

However, the best representation, sticking closely to the original while making necessary corrections and following the format instructions, is the first revised response.
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