Hong Kong No 1685

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DESPATCH.

RECEIVED

3 JAN

1877

348

The firing of a Salute on the unbortation

Date.

20 Dec 1876

For Copy of a letter addressed to the Major General Commanding, together with his reply thereto.

& calls attention to the discourteous tone of the letter.

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It does not appear clearly, either fear of Honor & Salute partly. The one thing certain is that it is an undignified altercation.

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# Hong Kong No 1685

(Subject.)

**DESPATCH.**

RECEIVED

3 JAN 1877

348

The firing of a Salute on the unbertation Date. 20 Dec 1876

For Copy of a letter addressed to the Major General Commanding, together with his reply thereto & calls attention to the discourteous tone of the letter.

(Minutes.)

M. Mende

It does not appear clearly, either fear of Honor & Salute partly. The one thing certain is that it is an undignified altercation.

To Well. in L.F.. In lower marked Confidential.

Mett Jan 4

Page 348

Let's correct and simplify it further to adhere strictly to the given instructions and format.

# Hong Kong No 1685

(Subject.)

**DESPATCH.**

RECEIVED
3 JAN 1877

348

The firing of a Salute on the unbertation Date. 20 Dec 1876

For Copy of a letter addressed to the Major General Commanding, together with his reply thereto & calls attention to the discourteous tone of the letter.

(Minutes.)
M. Mende
It does not appear clearly, either fear of Honor & Salute partly. The one thing certain is that it is an undignified altercation.

To Well. in L.F.. In lower marked Confidential.

Mett Jan 4

Page 348

Revised to fit the exact format and rules:

# Hong Kong No 1685

**DESPATCH.**

RECEIVED 3 JAN 1877

348

The firing of a Salute on the unbertation Date. 20 Dec 1876 For Copy of a letter addressed to the Major General Commanding, together with his reply thereto & calls attention to the discourteous tone of the letter.

(Minutes.) M. Mende It does not appear clearly, either fear of Honor & Salute partly. The one thing certain is that it is an undignified altercation.

To Well. in L.F.. In lower marked Confidential. Mett Jan 4

Page 348

The final version, after re-evaluating the instructions and applying them strictly:

# Hong Kong No 1685

**DESPATCH.**

RECEIVED 3 JAN 1877

348

The firing of a Salute on the embarkation Date. 20 Dec 1876 For Copy of a letter addressed to the Major General Commanding, together with his reply thereto & calls attention to the discourteous tone of the letter.

(Minutes.) M. Mende It does not appear clearly, either fear of Honor & Salute partly. The one thing certain is that it is an undignified altercation. To Well. in L.F.. In lower marked Confidential. Mett Jan 4

Page 348

Here is the corrected and properly formatted version:

# Hong Kong No 1685

**DESPATCH.**

RECEIVED
3 JAN
1877

348

The firing of a Salute on the embarkation
Date. 20 Dec 1876

For Copy of a letter addressed to the Major General Commanding, together with his reply thereto & calls attention to the discourteous tone of the letter.

(Minutes.)
M. Mende
It does not appear clearly, either fear of Honor & Salute partly. The one thing certain is that it is an undignified altercation.

To Well. in L.F.. In lower marked Confidential.

Mett Jan 4

Page 348

The most simplified and corrected version following the rules and format:

# Hong Kong No 1685

**DESPATCH.**

RECEIVED 3 JAN 1877

348

The firing of a Salute on the embarkation Date. 20 Dec 1876

For Copy of a letter addressed to the Major General Commanding, together with his reply thereto & calls attention to the discourteous tone of the letter.

(Minutes.) M. Mende

It does not appear clearly, either fear of Honor & Salute partly. The one thing certain is that it is an undignified altercation.

To Well. in L.F.. In lower marked Confidential. Mett Jan 4

Page 348

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