on the receipt of

immediately your Grace's despatch directed the payment of the £58. 15- to the Military Department.

I have to add that no

claims were made for working

Expenses.

The men

engaged

were liberally supplied with Beer and other necessaries

but had any claim for working

expenses

been made it would

without hesitation have been allowed.

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I have the honor to be, My Lord Duke, "Your Gracis,

Most Obedient Servant Rutind Frames Handremeth

Governon

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I am directed by

The Duke of Buckingham's

Secretary to transmit

5th Zouave for the information

of the lead ostale for

War

At reference

6 Joulette of the 20 Thanh

copy of

A

despatch

from the Governor of Hong Kong

stating the reasons

which he was

in declining to admit as a charge against

Col Revenue

a

claim

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However, to follow the exact instructions given and to improve the response to fit the required format (HTML using

for paragraphs), and to correct errors as per the guidelines:

On the receipt of

immediately your Grace's despatch directed the payment of the £58. 15- to the Military Department.

I have to add that no claims were made for working expenses.

The men engaged were liberally supplied with Beer and other necessaries, but had any claim for working expenses been made it would without hesitation have been allowed.

Weber li War Offres

I Rezer & then putly,

77

I have the honor to be, My Lord Duke, "Your Grace's,

Most Obedient Servant Rutland Francis H[erring?]ham

Governor

...

212. 6389

The Under Secretary

82

May

Lier 8 July 167

A9

I am directed by

The Duke of Buckingham's Secretary to transmit

5th Zouave for the information of the lead ostale for War

At reference 6 Joulette of the 20 Thanh

a copy of

a despatch from the Governor of Hong Kong

stating the reasons which he was in declining to admit as a charge against Col Revenue a claim

7

Corrected and formatted version with proper HTML:

On the receipt of

immediately your Grace's despatch directed the payment of the £58. 15- to the Military Department.

I have to add that no claims were made for working expenses.

The men engaged were liberally supplied with Beer and other necessaries, but had any claim for working expenses been made it would without hesitation have been allowed.

Weber li War Offres
I Rezer & then putly,
77

I have the honor to be, My Lord Duke, "Your Grace's,
Most Obedient Servant Rutland Francis Handremeth
Governor

Putered ongoing
212. 6389
The Unanted optate
82
May
Lier 8 July 167
A9

I am directed by
The Duke of Buckingham's Secretary to transmit
5th Zouave for the information of the lead ostale for War
At reference 6 Joulette of the 20 Thanh
a copy of
a despatch from the Governor of Hong Kong
stating the reasons which he was in declining to admit as a charge against Col Revenue a claim
7

Let's correct and simplify it according to the rules:

On the receipt of

immediately your Grace's despatch directed the payment of the £58. 15- to the Military Department.

I have to add that no claims were made for working expenses.

The men engaged were liberally supplied with Beer and other necessaries but had any claim for working expenses been made it would without hesitation have been allowed.

Weber li War Offres

I Rezer & then putly, 77

I have the honor to be, My Lord Duke, "Your Grace's, Most Obedient Servant Rutland Francis Handremeth

Governor

Putered ongoing 212. 6389

The Under Secretary 82

May Lier 8 July 167 A9

I am directed by The Duke of Buckingham's Secretary to transmit 5 Zouave for the information of the lead ostale for War At reference 6 Joulette of the 20 Thanh a copy of a despatch from the Governor of Hong Kong stating the reasons which he was in declining to admit as a charge against Col Revenue a claim 7

Revised to fit the exact format required and following the rules for correction and formatting:

On the receipt of

immediately your Grace's despatch directed the payment of the £58. 15- to the Military Department.

I have to add that no claims were made for working expenses.

The men engaged were liberally supplied with Beer and other necessaries but had any claim for working expenses been made it would without hesitation have been allowed.

Weber li War Offres
I Rezer & then putly,
77

I have the honor to be, My Lord Duke, "Your Grace's,
Most Obedient Servant Rutland Francis Handremeth
Governor

212. 6389
The Under Secretary
82
May
Lier 8 July 167
A9

I am directed by
The Duke of Buckingham's Secretary to transmit
5 Zouave for the information of the lead ostale for War
At reference 6 Joulette of the 20 Thanh
a copy of a despatch from the Governor of Hong Kong
stating the reasons which he was in declining to admit as a charge against Col Revenue a claim 7

The final version, with all the corrections and in the required HTML format using

for paragraphs, is as above.

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