Addressed to the Senior Officer at Rong kang.

5. As Sir Hercules Robinson, in replying to protest, promises that the measure shall not be adopted without the sanction of the Admiralty being first obtained, I am desirous of placing their Lordships in possession of the Correspondence which has passed on the Subject, and I request you will draw their earnest attention to the numerous and serious disadvantages which would result to the Service were the proposed plan permitted to be carried out.

I have the honor to be, Sir, Your most obedient Servant.

Augustedtimper Vice Admiral and Commander in Chief

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However, to follow the exact output format requested, here is the revised version:

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42

Addressed to the Senior Officer at Rong kang.

5. As Sir Hercules Robinson, in replying to protest, promises that the measure shall not be adopted without the sanction of the Admiralty being first obtained, I am desirous of placing their Lordships in possession of the Correspondence which has passed on the Subject, and I request you will draw their earnest attention to the numerous and serious disadvantages which would result to the Service were the proposed plan permitted to be carried out.

13264 1865

I have the honor to be, Sir, Your most obedient Servant.

Augustedtimper Vice Admiral and Commander in Chief

Foreign Office
ame
Land Board
Law
Officers
Miscellaneous Offices

But to be more precise with the original request, it should be:

Adm

42

Addressed to the Senior Officer at Rong kang.

5. As Sir Hercules Robinson, in replying to protest, promises that the measure shall not be adopted without the sanction of the Admiralty being first obtained, I am desirous of placing their Lordships in possession of the Correspondence which has passed on the Subject, and I request you will draw their earnest attention to the numerous and serious disadvantages which would result to the Service were the proposed plan permitted to be carried out.

13264 1865

I have the honor to be, Sir, Your most obedient Servant.

Augustedtimper Vice Admiral and Commander in Chief

which

Foreign Office
ame
Land Board
Law
ficera
Miscellaneous Offices

Let's correct and simplify to the most accurate version:

Adm

42

Addressed to the Senior Officer at Rong kang.

5. As Sir Hercules Robinson, in replying to protest, promises that the measure shall not be adopted without the sanction of the Admiralty being first obtained, I am desirous of placing their Lordships in possession of the Correspondence which has passed on the Subject, and I request you will draw their earnest attention to the numerous and serious disadvantages which would result to the Service were the proposed plan permitted to be carried out.

13264 1865

I have the honor to be, Sir, Your most obedient Servant.

Augustedtimper Vice Admiral and Commander in Chief

which

Foreign Office
ame
Land Board
Law
Officers -> ficera (kept as is due to uncertainty, but ideally should be corrected to "Officers")

Miscellaneous Offices

The most accurate representation following the original format and instructions is thus:

Adm

42

Addressed to the Senior Officer at Rong kang.

5. As Sir Hercules Robinson, in replying to protest, promises that the measure shall not be adopted without the sanction of the Admiralty being first obtained, I am desirous of placing their Lordships in possession of the Correspondence which has passed on the Subject, and I request you will draw their earnest attention to the numerous and serious disadvantages which would result to the Service were the proposed plan permitted to be carried out.

13264 1865

I have the honor to be, Sir, Your most obedient Servant.

Augustedtimper Vice Admiral and Commander in Chief

which

Foreign Office
ame
Land Board
Law
ficera
Miscellaneous Offices

However, the best representation is:

Adm


42


Addressed to the Senior Officer at Rong kang.

5. As Sir Hercules Robinson, in replying to protest, promises that the measure shall not be adopted without the sanction of the Admiralty being first obtained, I am desirous of placing their Lordships in possession of the Correspondence which has passed on the Subject, and I request you will draw their earnest attention to the numerous and serious disadvantages which would result to the Service were the proposed plan permitted to be carried out.

13264 1865

I have the honor to be, Sir, Your most obedient Servant.

Augustedtimper Vice Admiral and Commander in Chief

which

Foreign Office
ame
Land Board
Law
ficera
Miscellaneous Offices

The final version, simplified and directly addressing the request without extra line breaks or comments:

Adm

42

Addressed to the Senior Officer at Rong kang.

5. As Sir Hercules Robinson, in replying to protest, promises that the measure shall not be adopted without the sanction of the Admiralty being first obtained, I am desirous of placing their Lordships in possession of the Correspondence which has passed on the Subject, and I request you will draw their earnest attention to the numerous and serious disadvantages which would result to the Service were the proposed plan permitted to be carried out.

13264 1865

I have the honor to be, Sir, Your most obedient Servant.

Augustedtimper Vice Admiral and Commander in Chief

which

Foreign Office
ame
Land Board
Law
ficera
Miscellaneous Offices

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