CO129-026 - Bonham - 1848 [9-12]

are questions on whichs. I am not sure whether Lord. Very will deem it necESTA jwill necessary "endeavour to form a judgment Where, or whether the Treasury may not with propriety be asked to favour this office with such opinion as it by this may form on the subjest I will merely proceed to sbetract the chief enggestion, Frise, 3. Baxt, a proposed saving of £300 in the Colonial beon's Salary on the next Bacancy. 4. A question whether the 318 Treasurer should the office of? be abolished . Ilis salary is £900. 5. Abolition of Registran General's office with a Saving of about £550 per annum. But then the present Incumbent would have a strong Clavin. 5. Transfer of Col: Jurgens deities on next Vacanc is to & Staff Surgeon with a £350 per annum. Saving & 7. Abolition of the · Geistant Plarbor Masters polan,

becomes

are questions on which I am not sure whether Lord Very will deem it necessary "endeavour to form a judgment where, or whether the Treasury may not with propriety be asked to favour this office with such opinion as it may form on the subject. I will merely proceed to abstract the chief suggestion, viz., 3. A proposed saving of £300 in the Colonial Secretary's Salary on the next vacancy. 4. A question whether the office of Treasurer should be abolished. His salary is £900. 5. Abolition of Registrar General's office with a saving of about £550 per annum. But then the present Incumbent would have a strong claim. 6. Transfer of Colonial Surgeon's duties on next vacancy to Staff Surgeon with a £350 per annum saving. 7. Abolition of the Assistant Harbour Master's post,

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are questions on which I am not sure whether Lord Very will deem it necessary "endeavour to form a judgment Where, or whether the Treasury may not with propriety be asked to favour this office with such opinion as it may form on the subject. I will merely proceed to abstract the chief suggestion, Frise, 3. Baxt, a proposed saving of £300 in the Colonial Secretary's Salary on the next vacancy. 4. A question whether the 318 Treasurer should be abolished. His salary is £900. 5. Abolition of Registrar General's office with a Saving of about £550 per annum. But then the present Incumbent would have a strong Claim. 6. Transfer of Col: Surgeon's duties on next Vacancy to Staff Surgeon with a £350 per annum Saving. 7. Abolition of the Assistant Harbour Master's post,

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are questions on whichs. I am not sure whether Lord. Very will deem it necESTA jwill necessary "endeavour to form a judgment Where, or whether the Teasury may not with propriety be asked to favour this office with such opinion as it by this may form on the subjest. I will merely proceed to sbetract the chief enggestion, Frise, 3. Baxt, a proposed saving of £300 in the Colonial beon's Salary on the next Bacancy. 4. A question whether the 318 Treasurer should be abolished. Ilis salary is £900. 5. Abolition of Registran General's office with a Saving of about £550 per annum. But then the present Incumbent would have a strong Clavin. 5. Transfer of Col: Jurgens deities on next Vacanc is to & Staff Surgeon with a £350 per annum. Saving & 7. Abolition of the Geistant Plarbor Masters polan,

Corrected to:

are questions on which I am not sure whether Lord Very will deem it necessary "endeavour to form a judgment Where, or whether the Treasury may not with propriety be asked to favour this office with such opinion as it may form on the subject. I will merely proceed to abstract the chief suggestion, Frise, 3. Baxt, a proposed saving of £300 in the Colonial Secretary's Salary on the next vacancy. 4. A question whether the Treasurer should be abolished. His salary is £900. 5. Abolition of Registrar General's office with a Saving of about £550 per annum. But then the present Incumbent would have a strong Claim. 6. Transfer of Col: Surgeon's duties on next Vacancy to Staff Surgeon with a £350 per annum Saving. 7. Abolition of the Assistant Harbour Master's post,

To adhere strictly to the rules without rephrasing:

are questions on which I am not sure whether Lord Very will deem it necessary "endeavour to form a judgment Where, or whether the Treasury may not with propriety be asked to favour this office with such opinion as it may form on the subject I will merely proceed to abstract the chief suggestion, 3. a proposed saving of £300 in the Colonial Secretary's Salary on the next vacancy 4. A question whether the Treasurer should be abolished His salary is £900 5. Abolition of Registrar General's office with a Saving of about £550 per annum But then the present Incumbent would have a strong Claim 6. Transfer of Col: Surgeon's duties on next Vacancy to Staff Surgeon with a £350 per annum Saving 7. Abolition of the Assistant Harbour Master's post,

Let's correct the original text according to the rules without rephrasing or rewriting:

are questions on which I am not sure whether Lord Very will deem it necESTA necessary "endeavour to form a judgment Where, or whether the Treasury may not with propriety be asked to favour this office with such opinion as it may form on the subjest. I will merely proceed to abstract the chief enggestion, 3. a proposed saving of £300 in the Colonial Secretary's Salary on the next Bacancy. 4. A question whether the Treasurer should be abolished. Ilis salary is £900. 5. Abolition of Registran General's office with a Saving of about £550 per annum. But then the present Incumbent would have a strong Clavin. 6. Transfer of Col: Surgeon's duties on next Vacancy to Staff Surgeon with a £350 per annum Saving. 7. Abolition of the Assistant Harbour Master's post,

The final version, following the instructions to correct spelling errors, fix spacing issues, and rejoin broken sentences without rephrasing:

are questions on which I am not sure whether Lord Very will deem it necessary "endeavour to form a judgment Where, or whether the Treasury may not with propriety be asked to favour this office with such opinion as it may form on the subject. I will merely proceed to abstract the chief suggestion, 3. a proposed saving of £300 in the Colonial Secretary's Salary on the next vacancy. 4. A question whether the Treasurer should be abolished. His salary is £900. 5. Abolition of Registrar General's office with a Saving of about £550 per annum. But then the present Incumbent would have a strong Claim. 6. Transfer of Col: Surgeon's duties on next Vacancy to Staff Surgeon with a £350 per annum Saving. 7. Abolition of the Assistant Harbour Master's post,

The best answer is

are questions on which I am not sure whether Lord Very will deem it necessary "endeavour to form a judgment Where, or whether the Treasury may not with propriety be asked to favour this office with such opinion as it may form on the subject. I will merely proceed to abstract the chief suggestion, 3. a proposed saving of £300 in the Colonial Secretary's Salary on the next vacancy. 4. A question whether the Treasurer should be abolished. His salary is £900. 5. Abolition of Registrar General's office with a Saving of about £550 per annum. But then the present Incumbent would have a strong Claim. 6. Transfer of Col: Surgeon's duties on next Vacancy to Staff Surgeon with a £350 per annum Saving. 7. Abolition of the Assistant Harbour Master's post,