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The tone of the draft is about right, i.e. it is essentially a factual account, avoiding provocative statements Within reasonable bounds. This is particularly important if we are to achieve a soft landing in the case of a breakdown. (Atg SCA)
At present the White Paper comprises an extensive review of the history and present state of negotiations with the CPG on enhancing democracy in Hong Kong However, in many respects it adopts a neutral tone (except in describing some of the frustrations of the recent talks) and does not demonstrate that HMG/HKG are in touch with the complex concerns and aspirations of the community. As such it misses an opportunity to mobilise extensive The White
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(viii) At some point, should set out in rather clearer terms the rationale for our proposals and spell out the intimate relationship between a credibly elected legislature in Hong Kong, the rule of law and the integrity of Hong Kong's institutions. Rig the elections and you We should also emphasise the practical need for the Governor to come forward with proposals; he didn't just decide to do it out of the blue. (EL)
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The paper should include a brief reference to widespread support in Parliament.
Specific Points by Paragraph and Section
(A) Introduction
Head, CPU suggests this section might include:
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recognition of the real difficulties that the community has in resolving the conflicts between the pursuit of democracy and stability;
mention of the responsibilities of HKG/HMG to respect that the people's loyalties are to Hong Kong and Chinese society, rather than to Britain;
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