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Para 10: line 3: suggest replacing "plenty" with "a good deal", and adding an extra final sentence: "We need to do so for Hong Kong's Legislative Council to have time to pass the necessary legislation for the forthcoming elections."
Para 11: fourth line from the bottom: suggest adding "including a Governor's Question Time", after "measures".
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Edwal
(Edward Llewellyn)
Personal Adviser to the Governor
Peter Ricketts Esq
Hong Kong Department
Foreign & Commonwealth Office London