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OF QUOTE TO UNQUOTE. WE ALSO SUGGEST DELETION OF THE LAST SENTENCE: THE PAPER WE HAVE HANDED OVER IN THE JUDICIARY IS NOT RELATED TO THE ISSUES RAISED IN THESE
PAPERS (SEE (A) ABOVE).
IN PARA 8 WE SUGGEST QUOTE RELATIONSHIP UNQUOTE INSTEAD
OF QUOTE INTERFACE UNQUOTE.
IN PARA 11 SECOND SENTENCE WE SUGGEST A FULL STOP AFTER QUOTE LAW UNQUOTE AND REPLACEMENT OF THE NEXT FOUR WORDS BY QUOTE THE CONCEPT WAS ALSO TOUCHED UPON UNQUOTE. IN THE THIRD SENTENCE WE SUGGEST DELETION OF QUOTE FURTHERMORE UNQUOTE, AND IN THE FIFTH SENTENCE DELETION OF QUOTE STILL UNQUOTE, QUOTE WITH CERTAINTY UNQUOTE AND ALL AFTER QUOTE HONG KONG UNQUOTE. IN PARA 12 SECOND SENTENCE WE SUGGEST DELETION OF QUOTE GENUINE AND ENDURING UNQUOTE (BEST TO STICK TO JD WORDING). WE ALSO THINK YOUR FACTORS (A)-(F) COULD BE SHORTENED AS FOLLOWS:
I) A) TO READ QUOTE THE DEVELOPMENT OF HONG KONG'S STRUCTURE OF GOVERNMENT SHOULD TAKE PLACE GRADUALLY AND
STEP BY STEP UNQUOTE.
II) B) TO READ QUOTE THE BASIC LAW SHOULD ALLOW FOR THE CONTINUING EVOLUTION OF HONG KONG'S SYSTEM OF GOVERNMENT IN RESPONSE TO THE CHANGING NEEDS AND ASPIRATIONS OF THE
COMMUNITY UNQUOTE.
III) IN C) REPLACE QUOTE DEVELOPED IN SUCH A WAY THAT UNQUOTE WITH QUOTE ONE IN WHICH UNQUOTE.
IV) IN D) REPLACE ALL DOWN TO BEFORE QUOTE ADEQUATE
UNQUOTE WITH QUOTE THERE SHOULD BE UNQUOTE.
V) IN F) REPLACE ALL AFTER QUOTE SERVANTS UNQUOTE WITH QUOTE WHO ARE ABLE TO MAKE A SIGNIFICANT CONTRIBUTION TO
THE EXECUTIVE DECISION-MAKING PROCESS UNQUOTE.
WE ALSO THINK A FINAL PARA IS NEEDED TO EXPLAIN THAT WE
SEE A NEED TO ADDRESS SEPARATELY, IN DUE COURSE, THE SPECIFIC QUESTION OF CONVERGENCE BETWEEN THE HONG KONG GOVERNMENT STRUCTURE BEFORE 1 JULY 1997 AND THE SARG
STRUCTURE THEREAFTER. WE SUGGEST A NEW PARA 13 ON THE
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