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SO JUL 1987
MIPT STRUCTURE OF GOVERNMENT · LONGER TERM ISSUES
1.
OUR DETAILED COMMENTS ON YOUR DRAFT TEXTS IN YOUR TELNOS 2729-2732 ARE AS FOLLOWS.
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(A)
(B)
ON YOUR COVERING PAPER (YOUR TELNO 2729):
IN PARA 4 LAST SENTENCE. THE REFERENCE TO QUOTE THOSE
PAPERS UNQUOTE NEEDS AMENDMENT NOW THAT THE ELEMENTS
IN THE PARA HAVE BEEN REVERSED. WE SUGGEST INSTEAD QUOTE
THE PAPERS WE HAVE HANDED OVER UNQUOTE.
IN PARA 5 FIRST SENTENCE. QUOTE ACHIEVED UNQUOTE SHOULD
OF COURSE BE DELETED.
२.
ON YOUR PAPER ON THE CHIEF EXECUTIVE (YOUR TELNO 273U):
(A)
WE THINK YOUR PARA 12 SHOULD BE BROKEN INTO TWO PARAS
AFTER THE SECOND SENTENCE. THE SECOND PART OF THE PARA
IS SEPARATE AND RELATES BOTH TO WHAT GOES BEFORE AND TO PARA
11. THE PENULTIMATE SENTENCE ALSO NEEDS A REFERENCE TO
THE POSSIBILITY THAT THE CHIEF EXECUTIVE MIGHT BE REMOVED
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