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He's so very careful - avoids every drop -
and never complains when we shout 'photo-op !' ["comfort stop”].

Kinga and Karma and Nawang our guides,
and Dechen the driver and Pinto besides,
gave very good service for EMTT;
we hope that their futures will be complaint-free.

But as for the rest of the shower on those 'buses,
who all fell asleep while we drove through high passes,
just what can I say to instruct and amuse ?
Who first shall I finger - who next shall I choose?

There's Tony the tripod who kept us all guessing -
What f-stop? What angle? What focus lock?
At Senghor, the first of our al fresco messing,
we heard Tony say "Now then, who's got my rock ?”

Mary wears her single status with pride;
but en route to Bumtaling she had a personal guide.

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460 He's so very careful - avoids every drop - and never complains when we shout 'photo-op !' ["comfort stop”]. Kinga and Karma and Nawang our guides, and Dechen the driver and Pinto besides, gave very good service for EMTT; we hope that their futures will be complaint-free. But as for the rest of the shower on those 'buses, who all fell asleep while we drove through high passes, just what can I say to instruct and amuse ? Who first shall I finger - who next shall I choose? There's Tony the tripod who kept us all guessing - What f-stop? What angle? What focus lock? At Senghor, the first of our al fresco messing, we heard Tony say "Now then, who's got my rock ?” Mary wears her single status with pride; but en route to Bumtaling she had a personal guide.
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460 He's so very careful - avoids every drop - and never complains when we shout 'photo-op !' ["comfort stop”]. Kinga and Karma and Nawang our guides, and Dechen the driver and Pinto besides, gave very good service for EMTT; we hope that their futures will be complaint-free. But as for the rest of the shower on those 'buses, who all fell asleep while we drove through high passes, just what can I say to instruct and amuse ? Who first shall I finger - who next shall I choose? There's Tony the tripod who kept us all guessing - What f-stop? What angle? What focus lock? At Senghor, the first of our al fresco messing, we heard Tony say "Now then, who's got my rock ?” Mary wears her single status with pride; but en route to Bumtaling she had a personal guide.
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460

He's so very careful - avoids every drop -

and never complains when we shout 'photo-op !' ["comfort stop”].

Kinga and Karma and Nawang our guides,

and Dechen the driver and Pinto besides,

gave very good service for EMTT;

we hope that their futures will be complaint-free.

But as for the rest of the shower on those 'buses,

who all fell asleep while we drove through high passes,

just what can I say to instruct and amuse ?

Who first shall I finger - who next shall I choose?

There's Tony the tripod who kept us all guessing -

What f-stop? What angle? What focus lock?

At Senghor, the first of our al fresco messing,

we heard Tony say "Now then, who's got my rock ?”

Mary wears her single status with pride;

but en route to Bumtaling she had a personal guide.

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