1 December 1993
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GOVERNOR'S STATEMENT TO LEGCO:-2 DECEMBER.
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Many thanks for sending us with your letter of 1 December the latest draft of the Governor's statement. I have circulated this to Ministers' offices here for information.
1.
We only had one substantive comment, and a few further drafting suggestions for your consideration.
2.
The substantive comment relates to the 2nd full paragraph on page 5.
I see from a recent telegram that this was a point seized on by ExCo. But we have reservations about it.
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We therefore believe
that the paragraph is better left out.
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As for minor drafting suggestions, we had the following to be looked at if you are doing final polishing:
Page 5, 3rd full paragraph: worth saying "nor controversial in this Council or the Community"?;
Page 7, first full paragraph: Chinese side in the 3rd line. In the 4th line "separate the arrangements for the District Organisation elections from those for LegCo";
Page 7, 3rd full paragraph: the reference to differences existing sounds rather static, as if they can never be overcome. Better to say "when differences remain between the two sides"?;
Page 8, line 2: we wonder whether "maturity" strikes the right note. Could we not say "vision and good sense"?;
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