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03-JUN-1993. 17:58

PAUL FIFOOT

FAX TRANSMISSION

0372723755

P.01/07

To: NIGEL WHITNEY

Fax No.: 071 270 3387

Hong Kong Department, FCO

Pagcs. including this page: 7.

+IKA

233.1

04 JUN 1993

PLEASE COPY TO: ALAN MCDONALD, ODA

From: PAUL FIFOOT

Date: 3rd June 1993

Fax and tel no.: 0372 723755

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DRAFT COMPENSATION SCHEME

This and the next two faxes contain a further. redraft.. of the Compensation Scheme and a commentary on various points. The draft takes account of Mike Waters letters of 30th March and 6th April and Alan McDonald's faxes of 4th and 25th May, as discussed during our meeting on 26th May. The decisions taken at that meeting have resulted in a somewhat enlarged draft !

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2. I set out below a number of specific comments. should also note the passages in bold type in the main part of the text (not the headings), which, in effect, are questions.

For

Title: I have altered the order of the title. "Chinese" rcasons I would be inclined to omit the reference to "retirement" even though we do include a right to retire.

Definitions:

"appointed day", here and elsewhere, is now 29th

June 1997.

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