TNAG-2428-FCO40-3530-Hong-Kong-Her-Majesty-s-Overseas-Civil-Service-(HMOCS)-poli-1992 — Page 5

To: NIGEL WHITNEY

FAX TRANSMISSION

Hong Kong Department, FCO

Fax No.: 44 71 270 3387

Pages, including this one: 4.

From: PAUL FIFOOT

c/o British High Commission, Kampala

Date: 1st November 1992

HMOCS: CONTRACT OFFICERS

1. I have no copy of Hong Kong legislation or, more important, no copy of the draft compensation and incentive scheme with me, so insofar as they are relevant to what

follows, I have to rely on my memory. But I do not think that this should delay your submission, subject to what follows.

Draft submission

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2. I have the following comments:

exclyde"

para 5, line 2: substitute "not expressly excly

for "allow for".

Para 5, line 7: substitude "fewer and earlier"

for "small".

Para 5, last sentence: Substitute: "We could,

had we wished, have excluded such service."

Para 6: insert before the last sentence: "Those

who had waited until we had published our

compensation and incentive scheme in April

last before opting for pensionable terms, could

well complain that we had misled them to their

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