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PARA 99: WE SEE SOME ADVANTAGE OF INCLUDING THE WORD QUOTE CONSULTATION UNQUOTE IN THIS PARAGRAPH. ONE WAY OF ACHIEVING THIS MIGHT BE TO RECAST THE FINAL SENTENCE AS FOLLOWS QUOTE IT IS THEREFORE THIS KIND OF CONSULTATION THAT WE HOPE TO ACHIEVE MORE COOPERATION AND BUILD UP BETTER UNDERSTANDING ON BOTH SIDES UNQUOTE.
PARA 100: WE WONDER WHETHER THE FINAL EXCHANGES TO WHICH YOU REFER IN THIS PARAGRAPH CAN STILL BE ACCURATELY DESCRIBED AS RELATIVELY NEW.
PARA 102: THE DRAFTING OF THE FINAL SENTENCE COULD BE IMPROVED TO AVOID THE REPETITION OF QUOTE SURE UNQUOTE AND QUOTE MAJOR UNQUOTE.
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