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Article & Paragraph
Art. 11, Para. 1
Art. 13, Para. 3
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Original English text.
of the draft BL
... the system for safeguarding the fundamental rights
...
... to deal with relevant external affairs
"
Art. 14, Para. 2
maintenance of the public
order of the Region."
...
it shall, on its own, manage the administrative affairs of the Region.
Art. 16
Art. 17, Para. 3
any law of the Region is not in conformity with the provisions of this Law ..."
Suggested text
... the system for protecting the fundamental rights
"1 ... to conduct relevant external affairs
11
...
...
maintenance of the public order in the Region."
"I
it shall, on its own, deal with the governmental affairs of the Region.
F
any law of the Region is not in accordance with the provisions of this Law."
Remarks
Internal consistency
(c.f. Article 4 above)
The expression "
處理
"
is
translated as "conduct" in the
second paragraph of Section I of Annex I to the JD.
Style
It would be more appropriate to translate the term 處理
as
"deal with", which is broader in
scope than "manage" (the Chinese
equivalent of which being
管理").
To draw on the language of the
second paragraph of Section II of Annex I to the JD.
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