(F)
UNQUOTE.
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SOCIAL PROGRAMMES.
AS WITH LAST YEAR WE SHOULD PREFER TO INCLUDE HOUSING
UNDER THIS SECTION AS A SUB-SECTION (A) RATHER THAN UNDER
DEVELOPMENT PROGRAMMES.
(G)
(H)
EDUCATION.
PARA 2. IN VIEW OF THE OVERALL LENGTH OF THE REPORT WE
WONDER WHETHER PARA 2 IS ABSOLUTELY ESSENTIAL. WE
SUGGEST IT COULD BE REMOVED WITHOUT THE LOSS OF ANY
SIGNIFICANT INFORMATION. GRATEFUL FOR YOUR VIEWS.
PARA 3. DOES QUOTE LAST YEAR UNQUOTE REFER TO 1985? IF SO, WE SUGGEST REPLACING IT WITH QUOTE IN 1985 UNQUOTE.
PARA 5, LAST SENTENCE. DOES QUOTE IT UNQUOTE REFER TO
HONG KONG'S VOCATIONAL TRAINING COUNCIL? IF SO WE
SUGGEST WE SAY QUOTE THE COUNCIL UNQUOTE.
MEDICAL SERVICES.
PARA 2, SENTENCE 1. WE ASSUME QUOTE A REPORT UNQUOTE REFERS TO A REPORT COMMISSIONED BY THE HONG KONG
GOVERNMENT. IF SO WE SUGGEST ADDING QUOTE GOVERNMENT
COMMISSIONED UNQUOTE BEFORE QUOTE REPORT UNQUOTE.
(I)
CULTURE, RECREATION AND SPORT.
PARA 2. IN VIEW OF THE OVERALL LENGTH OF THE REPORT
COULD WE DELETE THE LAST SENTENCE ABOUT MEDALS?
FOR YOUR VIEWS.
GRATEFUL
(J)
BROADCASTING.
(K)
PARA 1. WE SUGGEST AMENDING QUOTE POLICY APPROVAL
UNQUOTE TO QUOTE APPROVAL IN PRINCIPLE UNQUOTE.
DEVELOPMENT PROGRAMME
PARA 2, SENTENCE 2. WE ASSUME QUOTE LAST YEAR UNQUOTE MEANS 1985, IN WHICH CASE WE PREFER QUOTE IN 1985
UNQUOTE.
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