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LEVITY, OR EVEN QUOTE LAMENESS UNQUOTE). BUT THIS OF
COURSE IS FOR YOU TO DECIDE.
PARA 2 FOURTH SENTENCE: WE WONDER IF IT IS REASONABLE TO
LOOK FOR QUOTE COMMON GROUND UNQUOTE AT THIS EARLY (I.E. PRE
REVIEW) STAGE. SHOULD WE NOT RATHER BE TALKING ABOUT QUOTE
IDENTIFYING OPTIONS UNQUOTE RATHER THAN QUOTE PERCEIVING
COMMON GROUND UNQUOTE?
PARA 2 SIXTH SENTENCE: SIMILARLY WE SUGGEST QUOTE PROPOSALS
UNQUOTE MIGHT BE QUOTE OPTIONS UNQUOTE AND QUOTE DEVELOPED
UNQUOTE MIGHT THEREFORE BE QUOTE REFINED UNQUOTE.
PARA 4 LAST SENTENCE: WE WONDER WHETHER THE INCLUSION OF
QUOTE ORGANIC AND CREATIVE UNQUOTE SLIGHTLY CONFUSES THE
LAST IDEA IN THIS SENTENCE AND MIGHT REASONABLY BE
OMITTED?
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