TNAG-1332-FCO40-1762-Future-of-Hong-Kong-White-Paper-on-the-Joint-Declaration-1984 — Page 137

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GRS 1550

SECRET

SECRET

DESKBY 130800Z FCO AND HONG KONG

FROM PEKING 130446Z SEP 34

TO IMMEDIATE FCO

TELEGRAM NUMBER 2305 OF 13 SEPTEMBER

INFO IMMEDIATE HONG KONG

H

MILIL CILOSO

ALCEIVED IN RE

13 SEP 1984.

TOP COPY

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MIPT:

FUTURE OF HONG KONG: PART THREE OF THE WHITE PAPER.

THE FOLLOWING ARE MY DETAILED COMMENTS ON THE TEXT IN

YOUR TELNO 1790.

ANNEX 1.

1. PARAGRAPH 1: AMEND **ANNEX ONE'' TO ''ANNEX 1

2.

PARAGRAPH (B): THE LEGAL TEXT WILL ALMOST CERTAINLY DE SPLIT INTO TWO PARTS. WE HAVE SUGGESTED THE HEADINGS *'LAW** AND

**JUDICIAL SYSTEM'' PARAS 1-4 AND 5-11 OF THE EXISTING BRITISH

TEXT), BUT THE CHINESE ARE LIKELY TO CONTINUE TO REJECT THE IDEA OF HAVING HEADINGS. ADJUSTMENTS NEEDE ACCORDINGLY SELOW.

3. PARAGRAPH (B),3, FİRST SENTENCE: DELETE THE** BEFORE **POWER*' AND FOLLOW WITH TO MAKE LAWS IN THE SAR** LAST SENTENCE, DELTED ALL AFTER THEY WILL BECOME LAW! •

4.

PARAGRAPH (B),4, SECOND SENTENCE: THIS SHOULD BE SPLIT INTO TWO WITH **CONSEQUENTLY'' REPLACING ''AND''. THE AGREEMENT ITSELF

DOES NOT PROVIDE FOR APPEALS TO THE PRIVY COUNCIL TO CEASE. ''FROM

THAT TIME'' SHOULD BE DELETED: THE TIME HAS NOT YET BEEN DECIDED.

5. PARAGRAPH (B),4, THIRD SENTENCE: ADD **INABILITY OR** BEFORE 'MISBEHAVIOUR**,

6.

+

PARAGRAPH (3),4, LAST SENTENCE: RE-WRITE TO READ:

**IN ADDITION TO CHINESE, ENGLISH WILL CONTINUE

TO BE USED IN THE COURTS.''

THE CHINESE ARE LIKELY TO BE SENSITIVE ABOUT THE ORDERING

OF THIS SENTENCE.

7.

PARAGRAPH (3),5: DELETE EXTRADITION**

TO READ:

·

PE-WORD SENTENCE

FOR EXAMPLE, RECIPROCAL RECOGNITION AND ENFORCEMENT

OR JUDGMENTS AND SERVICE OF DOCUMENTS.''

3.

PARAGRAPH (C),2: REPLACE **

''COMPARABLE ZY **NOT LESS

FAVOURABLE'' . RE-WORD LAST SENTENCE TO READ:

SECRETARY.

..BUT THEY WILL NOT BE ABLE TO RISE TO THE RANK OF

SECRET

19.

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