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''THESE ACTIVITIES ARE CONSISTENT''
PARAGRAPH 5:
(A) IN FIRST SENTENCE, FOR ''PRESENT DIFFICULTIES'' SUBSTITUTE
BE OF INTEREST''.
(B) IN SECOND SENTENCE, FOR IT IS IN THE INTERESTS OF BOTH SIDES
TO MAINTAIN' SUBSTITUTE ''THE DESIRABILITY OF"?
PARAGRAPH 6:
DELETE PARAGRAPH AND · SUBSTITUTE:
''THE BRITISH GOVERNMENT TAKE THIS OPPORTUNITY TO POINT OUT
THAT THERE IS ALREADY ESTABLISHED IN HONG KONG MACHINERY FOR THE
CONSIDERATION OF CLAIMS FOR COMPENSATION BY INDIVIDUALS WHO BELIEVE
THEMSELVES TO HAVE BEEN WRONGFULLY INJURED OR THEIR PROPERTY TO HAVE
BEEN WRONGFULLY DAMAGED''.
PARAGRAPH 7:
(A) DELETE FIRST SENTENCE.
(B) IN THIRD SENTENCE, FOR 'SECONDARY QUESTIONS' SUBSTITUTE
'OTHER QUESTIONS'' AND FOR IMPORTANT ISSUE OF HONG KONG'' SUBSTIT-
UTE ''HONG KONG ISSUES''.
(C) IN FOURTH SENTENCE, FOR ''LARGER'' SUBSTITUTE "OTHER",
(D) IN LAST SENTENCE BEFORE ''OTHER'’ INSERT ''CERTAIN
4. YOU MAY CARE TO CONSIDER THESE SUGGESTIONS IN MAKING YOUR COMMENTS
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